I don't like rules, and avoid being in a situation that calls for them if at all possible. But it doesn't mean I can't make up my own.
Rule One: If there's an edgy feeling to something you've just finished, re-think it, stare at it if it's visual, and don't settle. I have a Rule Two, but it's irrelevant to this writing.
I applied that Rule One yesterday because I felt the original picture needed more POP.... and I don't mean soda. So I decided to give it some pizazz in the hopes that all my efforts would not be a waste of my time
..... here's what I came up with. Anyone disagree?